fifty-fifty is an unfair proposition…

wasted again

you know
things
are going
well
when
nothing
you say
comes
closeto
describing
how good
you feel.

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Hadn’t done a JL poem in a long time (only people who’ll know the exact meaning of that phrase are the 3 people who read the now deleted post describing in exquisite detail complete with real names some rather odd circumstance.) Memory fails as always to comply with events actual progression, but nothing new there. That is what it’s all about, after all. (And seriously, nobody got the Buffett reference in that other poem? Wow. The raisin offer is now null and void as I have eaten all the raisins.)

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5 Responses to “fifty-fifty is an unfair proposition…”

  1. Close to should be parted. All in all, a very good poem. Here’s mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/10/whisper-of-john-doe.html

  2. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/

    Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx

    • Jingle, with as much as you do for building an amazing online forum to share poetry, you have nothing to apologize for. I very much enjoy both submitting my work as well as being introduced to so many new poets with such a wide variety of styles and talents. Thanks for the awards, I will put them up on my awards page later today or tomorrow when I have more than five minutes between errands and life (always too complicated!) Thanks again for all your help, your support, and your enthusiasm. Always good to hear from you, take care.

      crb.

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